community character! by rockermj

community character!

By: rockermj
Last Updated: Feb 9, 2015
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rockermj (2) | February 9, 2015 11:26pm
ok, whatever you say phoenix... whatever you say
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PhoenixRedBlack (1) | February 9, 2015 4:46pm
We're becoming Famous that's why.....People will whisper us..."Love me..." :3 Messed up mind I have!

-Your Dark Humorous Writer
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rockermj (2) | February 9, 2015 2:05pm
im not sure King maybe you did but thank for the complement it really means alot :)
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KingSaint | February 9, 2015 12:19pm
The idea of Blitz is AWSOME, and did I play against you in Vainglory before?
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rockermj (2) | February 8, 2015 9:57am
G1mme, i was thinking of an idea like that but i couldnt find a reasonable way to work so i started thinking of different ideas and came up with the mines, which i think are very unique
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PhoenixRedBlack (1) | February 7, 2015 12:34pm
I guess it's not recommended to having an Italian write the lore :P
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g1mmetheg10ry | February 7, 2015 1:36am
maybe the ult could be like " Blitz commands a electric cloud to surround her and enemies standing under it will have their armour shredded little by little while applying damage over time." the damage applied could be little to prevent this champion from getting op.
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rockermj (2) | February 6, 2015 5:55pm

Blitz’s Life

You never know when someone’s life can turn upside down...Pathetic isn’t it? A simple steal and run made my life upside down, turning into something I didn’t planned in life to do….

It all started when I was hungry living down in the undersprawl I was just a kid back then, All alone a helpless looking child, The only way I survived that life was stealing stuff, the usual Snatch and run thing, “Steal what looks valuable and shiny” I said, Sometimes my luck days were everyone got drunk in a nearby Inn and strip them off their clothes. Poor Ringo….I heard he’s arm got ripped off by that same Grangor who put me in all of this mess! Glaive….Stupid Grangor If I can return to the Undersprawl right now...I will…I Will....Turn him to godamn ashes! If I can only get out of here….


I won't continue unless you tell me this is "Decent" atleast :P


it is good but here are somecorrections to make, just gramatical things.

change steal and run to grab and run

change the end of first paragraph to "turning it into something i never planned."

remove hungry from p2 s1 (paragraph 2 sentance 1)

lowercase a in all p2 s2

comma after alone p2 s2

change comma to perion after child p2 s2

refove stuff p2 s3 (after change)

lowercase s in snatch p2 s3

change comma to period after said p2 s3

change luck to lucky p2 s4 (after change)

im just gonna copy paste and fix the rest, this is taking awhile

Sometimes my luck(y) days were (when) everyone got drunk in a nearby Inn and (I would) strip them of(remove f) their clothes. Poor Ringo….I heard h(i)s arm got ripped off by that same Grangor who put me in all of this mess! Glaive….Stupid Grangor If I c(ould only) return to the Undersprawl right now...I w(ould)…I (would)....Turn him to godamn ashes! If I can only get out of here…

besides those errors i love it! keep it up
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PhoenixRedBlack (1) | February 5, 2015 2:38pm
Blitz’s Life

You never know when someone’s life can turn upside down...Pathetic isn’t it? A simple steal and run made my life upside down, turning into something I didn’t planned in life to do….

It all started when I was hungry living down in the undersprawl I was just a kid back then, All alone a helpless looking child, The only way I survived that life was stealing stuff, the usual Snatch and run thing, “Steal what looks valuable and shiny” I said, Sometimes my luck days were everyone got drunk in a nearby Inn and strip them off their clothes. Poor Ringo….I heard he’s arm got ripped off by that same Grangor who put me in all of this mess! Glaive….Stupid Grangor If I can return to the Undersprawl right now...I will…I Will....Turn him to godamn ashes! If I can only get out of here….


I won't continue unless you tell me this is "Decent" atleast :P
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KingSaint | February 5, 2015 2:10pm
Oh AWSOME hero, I hope they read this and think about making this XD
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PhoenixRedBlack (1) | February 4, 2015 10:29pm
Well ee got a name Blitz
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PhoenixRedBlack (1) | February 4, 2015 8:15pm
Thinking about it its abilities seems to have a little OPness in it but it works Maybe lower them a tiny bit Ok :3
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